not-so-random voices in my head

[melo_annechen]

“She thinks she’s writing about us.”

“Oh, I do NOT think so.”

“Sad, but true.”

“Wait, what is that other file - Oh, no…”

“Yup, the kids didn’t escape notice either.”

“Who is this? Nice bit of dialogue here, but the mechanics do not work that way.”

“What do you expect? She thinks she’s making it up as she goes along. Ooh, that’s interesting…”

“Which one? Oh, that - I do not think she plans to publish that one under her names.”

“I think you’re right; too blue for her regular audience. Must be for her own entertainment.”

“There is an entire section that is not even her ’original’ work.”

“Looks like a lot of mad science, steam age, government conspiracy issues, and hippie wizards.”

“This one looks interesting, if vague. I begin to see her difficulty.”

“Too much warp and not enough wefts. Oh, my.”

“What did you find?”

“The ceremony at the beginning of the third act; it’s just so…”

“Hmm, yes.”

Comments

[sff-corgi.livejournal.com]

LOL! Not so much a St. David's Day flavour, but I'll take it.

[thaeus]

I gotta like '“Too much warp and not enough wefts. Oh, my.”'

[blueeyedtigress.livejournal.com]

*snicker* Don't you just love the running critique from the cheapseats characters? I wrote a drabble along those lines earlier this week -- for those interested, it's over here on go100. (It generated some great discussion on what constitutes good fic vs. dreadful cliche.)

[ailsaek.livejournal.com]

That was really neat.