1 & 2: Very nice pairing of viewpoints! Luci looking at her own history, contrasted with the fascinating and unexpected glimpse of Grechin's inner workings -- they're both warm and comfy. ;]
3. I hadn't recognised the speaker, but only because I have Not Yet Got Around to finding time to read Narbonic. It's still a thought-provoking vignette for those of us who aren't quite what our fathers expected .... ;]
4. Poor Gil! But at least Klaus raised the lad well.
5. 3 of 5, right? At least, that's who I was picturing from the first couple of sentences (and it didn't change). As usual with those tow, I'm fairly certain there's more happening than I can glean from the words they use. Intriguing.
6. Yet another fascinating fragment of your original tale, I think. (The one with Augustus in it.) I'd like to see this written in full and told in order someday ..... brava!
My apologies: RAEBNC is a cop-out, especially when I *meant* to comment ....
3. I hadn't recognised the speaker, but only because I have Not Yet Got Around to finding time to read Narbonic. It's still a thought-provoking vignette for those of us who aren't quite what our fathers expected .... ;]
4. Poor Gil! But at least Klaus raised the lad well.
5. 3 of 5, right? At least, that's who I was picturing from the first couple of sentences (and it didn't change). As usual with those tow, I'm fairly certain there's more happening than I can glean from the words they use. Intriguing.
6. Yet another fascinating fragment of your original tale, I think. (The one with Augustus in it.) I'd like to see this written in full and told in order someday ..... brava!